Class Review 10
Setelah
satu minggu tanpa menulis class review, akhirnya malam ini saya harus berperang
kembali dengan tulisan. Laptop, pulpen, buku, teks “Don’t Use Your Data as Your
Pillow”, dan tidak lupa modem yang telah diisi kuota menjadi alat tempur saya
untuk mengerjakan class review. Kini materi yang dijelaskan oleh Pak Lala sudah
sangat menjurus ke argumentative essay. Ini berarti kami diharuskan untuk lebih
rajin dalam membaca. Menurut Lehtonen,
sensasi yang menyenangkan ketika membaca itu adalah disaat kita menemukan
hal-hal baru.
Pertama kali ketika mendengar kata
argumentative essay, pastinya langsung berfikiran tentang argumen atau
pendapat, dan tentunya akan lebih sulit
dari critical review karena pada argumentative essay, penulis harus membujuk audiens Anda untuk mempertimbangkan sudut pandang Anda, bahkan
jika mereka mungkin tidak setuju dengan Anda.
Hal ini membutuhkan beberapa perawatan dan keterampilan: Anda perlu menunjukkan rasa hormat karena menentang sudut pandang, Anda harus memilih kosa kata dengan hati-hati, dan, di atas semua, Anda harus menulis dengan jelas dan logis.
Hal ini membutuhkan beberapa perawatan dan keterampilan: Anda perlu menunjukkan rasa hormat karena menentang sudut pandang, Anda harus memilih kosa kata dengan hati-hati, dan, di atas semua, Anda harus menulis dengan jelas dan logis.
Argumentative essay adalah genre
penulisan yang mengharuskan siswa untuk menyelidiki topik; mengumpulkan, menghasilkan,
dan mengevaluasi bukti; dan membangun posisi pada
topik secara ringkas. Beberapa
kebingungan mungkin terjadi
antara argumentative essay dan expository essay. Kedua genre serupa,
tetapi argumentative essay berbeda dari ekspository essay dalam jumlah pra-menulis (penemuan) dan
penelitian yang terlibat. Argumentative essay umumnya ditugaskan
sebagai batu penjuru atau tugas akhir secara
tertulis tahun pertama atau
kursus komposisi maju dan melibatkan waktu
yang panjang,
penelitian rinci. Ekspository essay melibatkan penelitian kurang dan lebih pendek panjang. Ekspositori essay sering digunakan untuk latihan menulis di kelas atau tes, seperti
GED atau GRE.
Argumentative essay terdiri dari:
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Introduction
Untuk menarik perhatian
pembaca, memusatkan perhatian pembaca kepada argumen yang akan disampaikan,
atau menunjukkan dasar-dasar mengapa argumentasi dikemukakan.
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Body
Untuk membuktikan
kebenaran yang akan disampaikan dalam paragraf argumentasi sehingga kesimpulan
yang akan dicapai juga benar. Kebenaran yang disampaikan dalam tubuh argument
harus dianalisis, disusun, dan dikemukakan dengan mengadakan observasi,
eksperimen, penyusun fakta, dan jalan pikiran yang logis.
·
Conclusion
Untuk membuktikan kepada
pembaca bahwa kebenaran yang ingin disampaikan melalui proses penalaran memang
dapat diterima sebagai sesuatu yang logis.
Define
the topic
Ø West Papua
West Papua
Province (Indonesian: Provinsi Papua Barat) is a province of
Indonesia. It covers the western peninsula of the island of New Guinea. Its
capital is Manokwari and the 2010 census recorded a population of 760,855.
Prior
to 2007, the province was known as West
Irian Jaya (Indonesian: Irian Jaya Barat). The region covers the
Bird's Head (Doberai) and Bomberai peninsulas and the surrounding islands of
Raja Ampat. With a population of 760,855, it is the least populous province of
Indonesia.
Even
after Indonesia's independence in 1949, Irian Jaya was retained by the Dutch
for various reasons. However, Indonesia claimed all of the territory of the
former Dutch East Indies, including the Dutch New
Guinea holdings, so it invaded Irian Jaya in 1961. It was agreed that the UN
should oversee a plebiscite of the people of West Papua, in which they would be
given two choices: to remain part of Indonesia or to become an independent
nation. This vote was referred to as the 'Act of Free Choice'. However, the vote was
instead conducted by musyawarah,
or consensus of elders, with approximately 1,000 men selected by the Indonesian
military. This body was coerced into unanimously voting to remain part of
Indonesia, and became the province of Irian Jaya, later Papua. The result of the vote was rejected by
Papuan nationalists, who established the Free Papua Movement (OPM). The independence
movement for West Papua has continued, primarily through peaceful protest and
international pressure, but also guerrilla warfare against Indonesian
administration
West
Papua was created from the western portion of Papua province in February 2003,
initially under the name of Irian Jaya Barat; it was later renamed Papua
Barat (West Papua) on 7 February 2007. In November 2004, an Indonesian
court agreed that the split violated Papua's autonomy laws. However, the court
ruled that because the new province had already been created, it should remain
separate from Papua. The ruling also prohibited the creation of another
proposed province, Central Irian Jaya, as that division had not
yet been formalised. The split is in line with the general trend of provincial
splits that is occurring in all parts of Indonesia
in the post-Suharto era. The new province has so far been widely supported by
the province's inhabitants, as the new entity created more jobs and more
government subsidies flowing into the province.
The
province changed its name to "West Papua" on 7 February 2007. The new
name applies from that date, but a plenary session of the provincial
legislative council is required to legalise the change of name, and the
government needs to then issue a regulation.
Ø NKRI
NKRI is a unitary republic with
a decentralized system (pasal 18 UUD 1945), in which local governments broad autonomy
to run outside the realm of government prescribed by
law as the affairs of the central
government.
Based
on the history of the Nation of Indonesia, at the time of the commencement of forced cultivation (Stelsel Culture) in 1615 by the
Netherlands has led
to the destruction of the
structure of the native owned
land, where the native land as the basic
capital in running activities. With
the applied forced cultivation has changed
the types of plants indigenous
to the type of plants imported from Europe postscript
is not controlled by natives, this causes the natives are no longer able
to manage its land and do not understand
the types of plants that come
from Europe, so the natives fooled by that
time, impoverished, backward
and oppressed. This
is then utilized by the Dutch
government to build
the so-called Dutch East Indies in order to regulate the
increasingly oppressed indigenous
life, which eventually came to pass peonage system
to explore crops
in Indonesia.
In the early 1900s the Dutch East Indies government implements policy ethis as a favor to the native
form by providing a system of education in
Indonesia. However, because of the
cost charged to get the education is too
expensive, not all
natives were able to enjoy education applied
in Indonesia. From this social strata in
the life of Indonesian society awakened. The form the social
strata has been positioned the natives as the majority are to the bottom of the class, a class on it is his noble
patrician-natives and the immigrants from East Asia (China, India,
Arab, etc.), then
the top class is the Europeans and the other white skin. It makes the natives as the
majority of the more stupid, impoverished, backward
and oppressed. So in
1908, Dr. Soetomoe build up education for natives
people on an informal basis and free of charge with
the name Budi Utomo
as a concern for the increasingly oppressed natives. At the end of the
natives education was continued by Ki
Hajar Dewantara by
founding in 1920 Student Park
formally, indigenous education run by
Dr. Soetomoe and
Ki Hajar Dewantara
raised souls nationality
and unity to
take the fight to the Netherlands, which eventually accumulate
the birth of the Nation of Indonesia on October 28, 1928 through Sumpah Pemuda moment in Pemuda congress II in Jakarta from Jong-jong or youth from various islands in
Indonesia, which has a commitment to
raise the dignity of people living Indonesian (natives). Indonesian nation was born
on October 28, 1928 and then work together to organize resistance to the Dutch
for independence of Indonesia and
less then 17
years 2 months
11 days or
less precisely on August 17, 1945 over the
grace of of Allah SWT, the
Indonesian nation to achieve
independence in the form of text Proclamation read
by Dwi-Tunggal Soekarno-Hatta. The next day, on August 18, 1945 the Indonesian
nation to form a State constitution of the Republic of Indonesia and the ratification of the Constitution of 1945 as a basic rule in the life of the nation.
Ø Integrate
(bergabung)
Many people, especially of indigenous Papuans themselves,
not find out that
there are some young
Papuans were present and to witness the Sumpah Pemuda event. This is caused by the lack of historical search conducted
by the Indonesian government. Therefore, it is used OPM to spread
the lie that there is no representative of Papua
in the event of the Sumpah Pemuda. Ramses Ohee, chairman custom of Tobati-Enggros, ever admitted that her parents, Abner and
Orpah Ohee Pallo,
ever contributed to the representative of Papua in the Youth Congress in
1928 even though they are members of the organization Jong Ambon.
Means it can be concluded
that in the past the people of Papua ever egreed to vowed bertumpah
darah satu, tanah air Indonesia, berbangsa satu, bangsa Indonesia, dan
menjunjung tinggi bahasa persatuan yakni bahasa Indonesia. People of Papua have long used Malay that will be
Indonesian since not officially join Indonesia.
In 1969, they held PEPERA conducted by 9 committese which has been inaugurated by DPRD. This committee immediately contact the Papuan community
leaders to immediately join the
DMP (Dewan Musyawarah
PEPERA). PEPERA is followed by 1026 members of the DMP was the representative
of the people of West
Papua from 8 districts. Most of the representatives who attended choose united
with NKRI.
Results of PEPERA then handed
over to Dr. Fernando Ortiz Sanz (PBB representative to oversee PEPERA) to be reported at the time of the 24th Session of PBB in November 19, Many as 84 of PBB member states approved the incorporation of West Papua into Indonesia, only 30 countries that
abstained and no single
country not agree. The Dutch themselves show
some respect the decision of the
people of West Papua.
Limit the topic
West Papua should
still integrate with Indonesia. T here are
many reasons; education, natural sources, culture and history.
Analysis the topic
Should West Papua still integrate with Indonesia?
Yes, because of
many reasons; first reason is education. It seems impossible that education
is undervalued owned by citizens of Papua, Papua
could lead his
own country. Second reason is natural sources. With abundant natural resources,
Papua could not
cultivate their own natural resources. Third reason is culture. Papua has contributed a lot of cultures to Indonesia. The last reason is history. Indonesia and Papua ever colonize by Dutch
colonial though
it has different
time.
Thesis statement
In order to completely understand about the problem why
west papua should still integrate with NKRI because of many reasons; education, natural resources, culture,
history, art, economi and politic.
OUTLINE
SHOULD THE GOVERNMENT STILL MAINTAINING PAPUA AS A PART
OF NKRI?
Introduction
West Papua is the western part of the island of New Guinea.
Directly adjacent to the independent
state of Papua New Guinea and became part of Indonesia after
going through a process that is discredited, known
as the ‘Act of Free Choice’ (Act of Free Choice) in 1969. NKRI is a unitary republic with
a decentralized system (pasal 18 UUD 1945), in which local governments broad autonomy
to run outside the realm of government prescribed by
law as the affairs of the central
government. In order to completely understand about the problem why
west papua should still integrate with NKRI because of many reasons; education, natural resources, culture,
and history.
Body
1.
Education
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75% of
Papuans do not have good access
education and average
years of schooling achieved is 5,5 years.
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50% of the
indigenous people of Papua have
never received formal education
or completes the primary education.
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22% of Papuans who graduated Primary School.
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10% of Papuans who
graduated Junior High School.
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2% of Papuans who graduated
University.
2.
Natural sources
According to http://www.anneahira.com/papua.htm
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West Papua (the Triton bay)
has 959 species
of reef fish and 471 species of coral
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Papua's forests have an area of
31 million hectares
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natural forests of Papua has
70 types of timber
trade
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From the Gold & Copper,
Freeport 1 Day get
116 Billion
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Total flora of Papua predicted
20000-25000 types (Jhons, 1997)
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In Papua, there are approximately
110 species of mammals.
3.
Culture
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Papua has 248 regional languages.
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Papua has 1068 indigenous tribe Papua.
4.
History
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PEPERA
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TRIKORA
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KMB
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New York Declaration
Conclusion
Papua should still integrate with NKRI everything happens because NKRI is
from Sabang until Merauke and it is never change.
Jadi
dapat disimpulkan bahwa dalam menulis argumentative essay bukanlah hal yang mudah
karena sebelumnya penulis harus melakukan research yang panjang dan
mendalaminya. Sebagai warga negara yang baik dan cinta tanah air Indonesia,
wajib hukumnya untuk mendukung Papua tetap menjadi bagian NKRI, karena bila
Papua memisahkan diri dari NKRI dan menjadi negara merdeka maka NKRI akan
kehilangan mutiara yang sangat berharga dan bahkan mutiara tersebut akan jatuh
ketangan asing yang ingin menguasai Papua. Untuk itu pemerintah harus
menunjukan kepeduliannya terhadap Papua, seperti memperbaiki infrastruktur
pembangunan, ekonomi, kesehatan, pendidikan, dan sebagainya.
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